Brandons+Tale

Once upon a time there was a student at Campbell University his name is Stewart. Stewart is a bright kid from Stem, North Carolina. Stewart is going to Campbell University to graduate with a Major in Math. There is just one problem; Stewart failed every math test that he had taken in college. Stewart studied for hours on into the night; hoping that he would pass his next test. Stewart’s efforts to pass a math test where futile. On the day after the test he confounded by his bad grade. He could not figure out why he failed. Then a bright idea came to him. Why not have the teacher tape me on the next test so I can see what I am doing wrong. The next morning Stewart went to ask the teacher if it would be ok to tape himself on the next test. After Stewart proposed the idea to the teacher, the teacher agreed and applauded him on such a great idea. The morning of the test, Stewart gave a video camera to his teacher and proceeded to his seat. The test began about nine o’clock, and Stewart was ready for anything that the test could through at him. Stewart was the first one completed with the test. He got out of his seat and preceded to the table were the teacher had placed the video camera. He took the video camera and left the classroom. The next morning the test had been graded. Stewart was so accelerated about what his grade was. When the teacher finally made it to Stewart’s seat she gave him a look of sorry as she was handing him the test. Stewart had made a sixty seven. He could not believe what he was seeing. That night Stewart decided to watch the video of him taking the math test. While watching the video tape he noticed that he was the first one done and did not going back and checking his work. This was the first time Stewart had ever notice that he was working too fast, and it was causing him to receive bad grades. Stewart decided that on the next test he would use all the time that was allowed. Two weeks have passed and it is time for another test. As the test was being passed out to the class, Stewart remembered that he needed to slow down and check his work. It took Stewart three hours to finish the test. It was the longest test he had ever taken. The next morning the test grades were in and Stewart was nervous. The teacher finally mad it over to Stewarts seat. The teacher placed the test upside down on Stewart’s desk. This scared Stewart because only bad grades were placed upside down. He finally got the nerves to flip the test over. He jumped out of his chair and shouted to the heavens “I did it, I finally passed a test”. Written on his paper was a huge 100 percent a good job from the teacher. Stewart learned that “Slow and Steady Wins the Race”. It did not matter how fast you completed something; the only thing that matters is getting it right.
 * // “Slow and Steady Wins the Race” //**

**the story is nice, but u have a lot of different tenses...in the beginning you're in present & then you change to past.